A population perspective on international students in Australian universities
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Abstract
Nearly a third of Australian university students are international, and major contributors to Australia’s economy. We explore the contribution to global higher education equity through population rates of international student enrolment in Australian universities. In 2022, per 100,000 population, median rates in regions studied were: Indian subcontinent 42, Pacific 28.9, China 10.5, South-East Asia 5.8, Sub-Saharan Africa 0.5: national rates varied from 0.03 to 403 per 100,000 population. to We find no regional or national patterns with GDP, proportion of GDP spent on education or access to national higher education, apart from some high GDP countries with high rates of student enrolment in Australian universities. Repeating the analyses for student numbers in 2019, and restricting the population denominator to ages 15-24 make no substantial difference. It is likely, given the high fees for international students, that individual ability to pay is the most important predictor of becoming an international student in Australian universities. We call for Australia to develop a strategy for international higher education based on global need rather than solely Australia’s economic benefit, and for a global alliance to support access to higher education for all individuals and populations that have capacity to acquire and use it.
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There is unevenness between low- to middle-income countries and their regions in the rate per population of being an international student in Australian universities. The difference is not proportional to the need for access to higher education in these regions or countries.
The patterns that seem to govern the high rates of international students in Australia, include countries with a high GDP and individual student's ability to pay the fees.
The findings of the study should contribute to the governments of Australia and other developed countries to reevaluate their policy on higher education for foriegn students
Major issues
The authors seemed to have approached the research with some bias
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There is unevenness between low- to middle-income countries and their regions in the rate per population of being an international student in Australian universities. The difference is not proportional to the need for access to higher education in these regions or countries.
The patterns that seem to govern the high rates of international students in Australia, include countries with a high GDP and individual student's ability to pay the fees.
The findings of the study should contribute to the governments of Australia and other developed countries to reevaluate their policy on higher education for foriegn students
Major issues
The authors seemed to have approached the research with some bias
Review and presentation of all foreign students would have helped give a true background picture and context to the findings
Minor issues
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Competing interests
The author declares that they have no competing interests.
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This review is the result of a virtual, collaborative live review discussion organized and hosted by PREreview as Module III of the Open Reviewers: Champions Program 2024 workshop on February 27, 2024. The discussion was joined by 22 people: 3 facilitators, and 19 members of the PREreview 2024 Champions Program cohort. We thank all participants who contributed to the discussion and made it possible for us to provide feedback on this preprint.
Summary paragraph
This study aims to examine the influence of distinct economic factors, including gross domestic product (GDP) and the proportion of GDP allocated to education, within the home countries of a significant cohort of international …
This Zenodo record is a permanently preserved version of a PREreview. You can view the complete PREreview at https://prereview.org/reviews/10870479.
This review is the result of a virtual, collaborative live review discussion organized and hosted by PREreview as Module III of the Open Reviewers: Champions Program 2024 workshop on February 27, 2024. The discussion was joined by 22 people: 3 facilitators, and 19 members of the PREreview 2024 Champions Program cohort. We thank all participants who contributed to the discussion and made it possible for us to provide feedback on this preprint.
Summary paragraph
This study aims to examine the influence of distinct economic factors, including gross domestic product (GDP) and the proportion of GDP allocated to education, within the home countries of a significant cohort of international students who choose to pursue higher education in Australia. The primary objective is to discern potential inequities in access to university education in Australia and identify barriers encountered by prospective students seeking to study abroad. Utilizing publicly available data, from 2019 to 2022, from the Australian government and the World Bank, the authors looked for correlations between different factors such as GDP, % GDP spent on education, and geographical location with international student enrollment in Australian universities.
Their design involved grouping countries that contributed more than 20 students into regions such as Southeast Asia, the Pacific, the Indian subcontinent, Sub-Saharan Africa, and China. Furthermore, they contrasted the level and field of study preferences between international and domestic students enrolled in Australian universities. While the authors did not find a strong correlation between the population rates of international student enrolment and the socioeconomic variables they used to compare, some outliers suggest that countries with higher GDP are associated with increased enrolment numbers in Australian universities. It is important to consider the potential impact of such exclusions on the overall interpretation of the results. Greater consideration of these "outliers" and their potential influence on the data coupled with robust sensitivity analyses, could enhance the validity and reliability of the findings.
The reviewers commend the study for its focus on global equity in higher education and its potential policy implications for Australia which could spark further research into higher education accessibility issues worldwide. However, concerns are raised about the clarity of the conclusions and the accuracy of the statistical methodology, indicating areas where the authors could enhance both their manuscript and the data analysis.
Major issues and feedback
Despite the qualities of the paper, we have identified the following major issues:
The methodology fails to account for significant covariates such as cultural, political, and economic factors, which exert considerable influence on international student enrollment patterns. This oversight increases the risk of providing incomplete and biased conclusions. A comprehensive analysis requires the inclusion of these factors to accurately capture the complex drivers of global higher education migration (which also includes factors such as visa regulations, language barriers, societal attitudes toward education, and perceptions of safety).
The statistical methods used may not be the most appropriate for the type of data being examined. A longitudinal study would have been more advantageous for a more thorough understanding of international student enrollment patterns and the factors influencing them. Unlike cross-sectional studies that capture data at a single point in time, longitudinal studies track the same variables over an extended period, offering insights into trends and changes over time. We would recommend the Haussmann test as an appropriate tool for this study; the fixed and random effect addresses also the issue in a manner that could benefit the study.
Clarify the role of COVID in the study, addressing its potential impact on the findings before and after its occurrence, to provide context for the results obtained.
The manuscript lacks clarity on the criteria used to include or exclude certain countries from the analysis. While it explains why some countries were excluded due to having fewer than 20 students studying in Australia, the rationale for removing outlier countries isn't adequately explained. While it's understandable that Malaysia/Singapore might be outliers due to Monash's campus there, a clearer justification and explanation of the threshold used to classify a country as an outlier within its region is necessary.
While the introduction focuses on countries of varying incomes, the main conclusions are aimed at low- and middle-income countries. This inconsistency can lead to confusion for readers, requiring a more thorough explanation for why low- and middle-income countries are the primary focus of the paper. Please provide more details about the criteria for grouping countries by geographical regions when the main research question is related to socioeconomic factors.
The methodology followed does not explain the reason for using (or not using) some variables nor does it show how the were results obtained. Better explaining their choice of methodology and comparing it to similar studies would add to the comprehension of the study.
It is unclear how variables having "apparent association" were determined. We suggest that whether this was determined numerically or in some other way, to include how this decision was made (ie: correlation coefficient, p-value).
While the data used is clear and easy to find, the methods used in the analysis are not sufficiently elaborated on, making it difficult for readers to reproduce. More detail on the statistical tests conducted is needed for greater reproducibility.
The conclusion seems to present ideas not directly supported by the data presented and lacks clear suggestions for future perspectives in the wider discussion about equity in access to higher education. Providing a more thorough commentary on the statistical analyses in the conclusion would strengthen the conclusions and remind readers of the basis for the arguments being made.
Minor issues and feedback
Concerns with techniques/analyses
The authors mention the countries that were excluded from the analysis and the inclusion criteria. A complete list of the countries included in the study is desirable in the main text.
Regarding the methods section, an explicit state of the cross-sectional 2019-2022 nature of their study could enhance clarity regarding their research approach.
Please describe the acronym GDP, this would be particularly useful for non-native English speakers.
In the limitations section the authors say that they selected "data from the countries and regions of most "relevance" to Australia's international education. Please provide more clarity on what is meant by "relevance".
In the conclusions, the authors suggest the development of a network for global online learning to reduce the global inequalities in access to higher education. We recommend a better explanation of what this network would look like, citing examples.
Details for reproducibility of the study
The lack of direct access to the original data creates an additional step that might hamper reproducibility efforts.
The authors should be commended for depositing the data and methods used in Zenodo for reproducibility purposes. However, we had some difficulties finding that repository when reading the manuscript, and it included only the data and not the detailed methods applied. An explicit indication of its existence in the methods and/or abstract sections would solve this issue.
The methods section could be improved by including details of the computational tools used to analyze and plot the data. It would be useful to add the code/script as a supplementary file to increase reproducibility.
Figures and tables
As a general comment, we recommend improving the tables and figures to enhance their clarity and visual appeal, making it easier for readers to understand the information presented.
The use of different colors for the outliers and highlighting specific relevant countries in the graphs would make the graph easier to understand. Moreover, the integration of figures 1 to 4 in a single image with identical y- and x-axes could enhance data comparison and interpretation.
Regarding tables, making the table design more uniform and adding grid lines would also enhance the comprehension of the data by the reader. Percentages in Tables 3 and 4 don't seem to add up to 100% - consider adding another row to show where the rest of the data is.
Authors might want to check a typo in Table 4, where one of the percentages is 438.2%
Consider removing titles for Figures 1-4 and including all the relevant information to understand the figures in the figure captions.
The legends and numbers in Figures 1-4 are hard to read because the font size is very small.
Discussion
The authors were cautious when stating their conclusions/interpretations, and we believe this is a positive aspect of the work. This is acknowledged in the title by the use of the word "Perspective". They acknowledge the lack of strong correlations between the variables studied, while at the same time recognizing the potential importance of the outlier data for their interpretation.
Greater discussion of what (if anything) changed pre and post-COVID is recommended.
The discussion will benefit by including more socioeconomic variables that could describe better the population under study.
Regarding the discussion of results, a comparison with other studies with similar goals could add some perspective on the results obtained by the authors.
It is appreciated that the authors mention cofounding factors in the limitations section, they should consider including this in the discussion section as well.
Additional comments
Typo on Page "on educationor" the "or" should be separated.
Generally to improve the overall professionalism of the manuscript we recommend conducting a thorough check for spelling errors, utilizing tools like Grammarly or similar software for assistance.
As this preprint might be interesting to many stakeholders, then the authors might make it easier to understand for a broader audience. For example, providing a plain text summary.
Concluding remarks
We thank the authors of the preprint for posting their work openly for feedback. We also thank all participants of the Live Review for their time and for engaging in the lively discussion that generated this review.
Competing interests
The authors declare that they have no competing interests.
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Does the introduction explain the objective of the research presented in the preprint? Yes Through compositional flow and coordination.Are the methods well-suited for this research? Highly appropriateAre the conclusions supported by the data? Highly supportedAre the data presentations, including visualizations, well-suited to represent the …This Zenodo record is a permanently preserved version of a Structured PREreview. You can view the complete PREreview at https://prereview.org/reviews/10790217.
Does the introduction explain the objective of the research presented in the preprint? Yes Through compositional flow and coordination.Are the methods well-suited for this research? Highly appropriateAre the conclusions supported by the data? Highly supportedAre the data presentations, including visualizations, well-suited to represent the data? I don't knowHow clearly do the authors discuss, explain, and interpret their findings and potential next steps for the research? Very clearlyIs the preprint likely to advance academic knowledge? Highly likelyWould it benefit from language editing? NoWould you recommend this preprint to others? Yes, it's of high qualityIs it ready for attention from an editor, publisher or broader audience? Yes, as it isCompeting interests
The author declares that they have no competing interests.
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Does the introduction explain the objective of the research presented in the preprint? YesAre the methods well-suited for this research? Somewhat appropriateAre the conclusions supported by the data? Somewhat supported Including a 5-10years trend of the data would have supported the conclusionsAre the data presentations, including …This Zenodo record is a permanently preserved version of a Structured PREreview. You can view the complete PREreview at https://prereview.org/reviews/10775334.
Does the introduction explain the objective of the research presented in the preprint? YesAre the methods well-suited for this research? Somewhat appropriateAre the conclusions supported by the data? Somewhat supported Including a 5-10years trend of the data would have supported the conclusionsAre the data presentations, including visualizations, well-suited to represent the data? Somewhat appropriate and clear Suited indeed, but one is left with questions whether the noted differences were statistically significantHow clearly do the authors discuss, explain, and interpret their findings and potential next steps for the research? Somewhat clearly Adding next step of future research to look at the employment status will assist in looking at the potential impactIs the preprint likely to advance academic knowledge? Highly likely This is a good research paper looking at whether the level of education given is contributing to global equityWould it benefit from language editing? NoWould you recommend this preprint to others? Yes, it's of high qualityIs it ready for attention from an editor, publisher or broader audience? Yes, as it isCompeting interests
The author declares that they have no competing interests.
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Does the introduction explain the objective of the research presented in the preprint? Yes The purpose of the study was clearly explained in the introduction.Are the methods well-suited for this research? Somewhat appropriate It was not initially clear which population ('per 100 000 population') the authors were referring to. However as one continues to read the article this confusion clears off. Overall approach is impressive, and does show that a lot of thought has gone into …This Zenodo record is a permanently preserved version of a Structured PREreview. You can view the complete PREreview at https://prereview.org/reviews/10775037.
Does the introduction explain the objective of the research presented in the preprint? Yes The purpose of the study was clearly explained in the introduction.Are the methods well-suited for this research? Somewhat appropriate It was not initially clear which population ('per 100 000 population') the authors were referring to. However as one continues to read the article this confusion clears off. Overall approach is impressive, and does show that a lot of thought has gone into preparation and execution of this study. Well done to the authors.Are the conclusions supported by the data? Highly supportedAre the data presentations, including visualizations, well-suited to represent the data? Highly appropriate and clear Tables and figures used are easy to comprehend. From just reading the caption one can follow presented information when going through the figures.How clearly do the authors discuss, explain, and interpret their findings and potential next steps for the research? Very clearlyIs the preprint likely to advance academic knowledge? Highly likely This preprint provides useful information regarding access to higher education, in particular to international education. The article raises important concerns regarding challenges faced by low and middle income countries.Would it benefit from language editing? No The article is clearly written with well articulated flow of facts. No need for language editing.Would you recommend this preprint to others? Yes, it's of high qualityIs it ready for attention from an editor, publisher or broader audience? Yes, after minor changes Minor suggestion/recommendation: If authors could indicate upfront in the methods section that the population referred to (denominator) is of the students' permanent residence.Competing interests
The author declares that they have no competing interests.
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Write a short summary of the research's main findings and how this work has moved the field forward.
Major issues
This research touches on the issue of importance both locally and globally as education is now accessible in this global village. The contribution of the international students to the Australian Universities and analysis of regions they come from provide insights with relation to global goals such as SDGs. The study also suggests on how host countries need to have a global view of the courses they offer. Universities should not only focus on local education needs but also offer global solutions.
Minor issues
The study could have analysed data with a 5-10year trend so as to give a …
This Zenodo record is a permanently preserved version of a PREreview. You can view the complete PREreview at https://prereview.org/reviews/10730258.
Write a short summary of the research's main findings and how this work has moved the field forward.
Major issues
This research touches on the issue of importance both locally and globally as education is now accessible in this global village. The contribution of the international students to the Australian Universities and analysis of regions they come from provide insights with relation to global goals such as SDGs. The study also suggests on how host countries need to have a global view of the courses they offer. Universities should not only focus on local education needs but also offer global solutions.
Minor issues
The study could have analysed data with a 5-10year trend so as to give a more clearer picture of the enrolment direction considering the disturbances of COVID 19.
Data on the Australian scholarships offered to international students could also have assisted in assessing contribution of the Australian universities.
A further recommendation of future research on the employment opportunities for international students is key.
Competing interests
The author declares that they have no competing interests.
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Does the introduction explain the objective of the research presented in the preprint? YesAre the methods well-suited for this research? Somewhat appropriateAre the conclusions supported by the data? Highly supportedAre the data presentations, including visualizations, well-suited to represent the data? Neither …This Zenodo record is a permanently preserved version of a Structured PREreview. You can view the complete PREreview at https://prereview.org/reviews/10715603.
Does the introduction explain the objective of the research presented in the preprint? YesAre the methods well-suited for this research? Somewhat appropriateAre the conclusions supported by the data? Highly supportedAre the data presentations, including visualizations, well-suited to represent the data? Neither appropriate and clear nor inappropriate and unclearHow clearly do the authors discuss, explain, and interpret their findings and potential next steps for the research? Somewhat clearlyIs the preprint likely to advance academic knowledge? Moderately likelyWould it benefit from language editing? NoWould you recommend this preprint to others? Yes, it's of high qualityIs it ready for attention from an editor, publisher or broader audience? Yes, after minor changesCompeting interests
The author declares that they have no competing interests.
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