A conserved RNA switch for acetylcholine receptor clustering at neuromuscular junctions in chordates
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In mammals, neuromuscular synapses rely on clustering of acetylcholine receptors (AChRs) in the muscle plasma membrane, ensuring optimal stimulation by motor neuron-released acetylcholine neurotransmitter. This clustering depends on a complex pathway based on alternative splicing of Agrin mRNAs by the RNA-binding proteins Nova1/2. Neuron-specific expression of Nova1/2 ensures the inclusion of small "Z" exons in Agrin, resulting in a neural-specific form of this extracellular proteoglycan carrying a short peptide motif that is required for binding to Lrp4 receptors on the muscle side, which in turn stimulate AChR clustering. Here we show that this intricate pathway is remarkably conserved in Ciona robusta, a non-vertebrate chordate in the tunicate subphylum. We use in vivo tissue-specific CRISPR/Cas9-mediated mutagenesis and heterologous "mini-gene" alternative splicing assays in cultured mammalian cells to show that Ciona Nova is also necessary and sufficient for Agrin Z exon inclusion and downstream AChR clustering. We present evidence that, although the overall pathway is well conserved, there are some surprising differences in Nova structure-function between Ciona and mammals. We further show that, in Ciona motor neurons, the transcription factor Ebf is a key activator of Nova expression, thus ultimately linking this RNA switch to a conserved, motor neuron-specific transcriptional regulatory network.
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Reviewer #1
“The research is meticulously conducted, and the data are compelling, as they demonstrate that the Nova-agrin-Lrp4-MuSK axis is also operational in non-vertebrates. The conclusions drawn by the authors are generally adequate; however, I find some instances of "it is the first time..." to be unnecessary.”
We have removed all unnecessary claims to that effect.
“The work also presents an unexpected finding that mouse Nova protein is unable to splice the Ciona agrin mini-gene (Figure 3). I believe the inability of …
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Reviewer #1
“The research is meticulously conducted, and the data are compelling, as they demonstrate that the Nova-agrin-Lrp4-MuSK axis is also operational in non-vertebrates. The conclusions drawn by the authors are generally adequate; however, I find some instances of "it is the first time..." to be unnecessary.”
We have removed all unnecessary claims to that effect.
“The work also presents an unexpected finding that mouse Nova protein is unable to splice the Ciona agrin mini-gene (Figure 3). I believe the inability of mouse Nova1 and Nova2 to splice the Ciona agrin could also be due to insufficient expression levels of the mouse proteins. Therefore, the authors should include either a positive control (e.g., mouse agrin mini-gene) or demonstrate that the proteins are expressed at comparable levels.”
We have now included two additional datasets supporting our conclusion. First, we have included the positive control with the mouse *Agrin *minigene as suggested by the reviewer, which shows that mouse Nova1 and Nova2 are indeed still able to splice the mouse *Agrin *minigene in our assay (Figure 3C). Second, we included fluorescence images of the GFP-fused mouse Nova1 and Nova2 showing their proper expression in the cells (Figure S7).
“I am also not fully convinced that the model of autoinhibition for Ciona Nova is supported by sufficient experimental data. Again, there are no data showing that the levels of the various deletion mutants of Nova are consistent and hence, there could be issues with the stbsility of some of the deletion mutants and this could explain the observed difference in activity.”
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We have added a few more datasets to further investigate the model. First, we have added an independent biological replicate of the “MLN” Nova isoform deletion mutant assays (Figure S8), as well as a separate assay using deletion mutants based on the “MMM” isoform (Figure S9). The results were consistent in both cases, confirming our initial observations. Next, we tested more directly the idea proposed by the reviewer that there are issues with stability, by looking at the fluorescence of the GFP-fused mutants. We did notice that the N/C-terminal deletion mutants were not expressed as well, but this was always mitigated by concurrent deletion of the KH3 domain. We have now expanded our discussion in the text to propose that there may be a negative effect of the KH3 domain on Nova expression/stability in the absence of the N/C termini. Although different from the model in which KH3 directly inhibits KH1/KH2, there does seem to be some inhibitory effect of KH3 on Nova expression/stability. * “- In all schematic presentations, exon Z6 appears larger than exon Z5. However, Z6 is only 24 bp long, while Z5 is 3434 bp long. Please adjust this representation.”*
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To clarify, in *Ciona *Z6 is 18 bp long, and Z5 is 15 bp long, hence they code for 6 and 5 amino-acids, respectively. This is different from the mammalian Z exons, which may be the source of the confusion here. In our schematics, we are only representing the *Ciona *Z exons.
“- Is there consistency in the relative proportions of the 24-bp (Z6), 33-bp (Z5), and 57-bp (Z6 + Z5) PCR products? Studies in vertebrates have shown that AChR clustering activity is highest with the Z8 and Z19 products, while the Z11 product appears to be somewhat less active. It would be nice to also point out the different splice products are detected in Ciona.”
It was not clear if there was any consistency in the relative proportions of *Ciona Agrin *splice products in the minigene assays as performed in cultured mammalian cells, though in Figure 1 we have pointed out a more detailed characterization of the different splice products *in vivo *in *Ciona. *The different splice products’ confirmed sequences are also shown in the supplemental sequences file.
“Line 111: 'Z11' Agrin should be corrected to 'Z19' Agrin.”
To clarify again, we are only referring to the *Ciona Agrin *Z exons, which are not the same sizes as the mammalian Z exons. While Z19 would refer to the combination of exons Z8 and Z11 (8+11 = 19) in mammals, here in *Ciona *the equivalent combination is Z11 (Z5 + Z6).
“Line 168: "Figure H" should be updated to "Figure 2H."”
Fixed.
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__*“44 - ALS, references 8-12. These are old papers. A new review should be cited, either instead of in addition.”
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We have read some newer reviews and cite three more recent reviews (references 10-12) now.
__* 56 - "many" cases of CMS - some are not due to mutations in this pathway
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We have altered this to say “many”.
__* 57 - refs 29-46. This is a very large number of references for a point this is quite unimportant to the story. It would be better to cite recent reviews.
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We have removed some references and also cited more recent reviews here (references 38, 39).
__* 168 - should be 2H
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Fixed.
__* 205 - make N terminal extension more apparent in Figure 3D
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We have recolored the N terminus to be red, as to make it more apparent, in figures 3 and S8 and S9.
__* 235 - not a complete sentence
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Fixed.
* 308+ - can the authors clarify whether EBF knockdown has a selective effect on Nova vs general failure of the neurons to acquire a MN phenotype *
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We have been investigating this in a separate study on MN specification and differentiation in Ciona, which will be published as a preprint soon. EBF does not have a selective effect on *Nova *expression, as it appears to be regulating multiple aspects of neuronal differentiation, consistent with its role as previously studied in *Ciona and other organisms (e.g. Kratsios et al. 2012, Catela et al. 2019, etc).__
614 - explain in figure legend the decrease in apparent MR from left to right in 4B
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This is just an example of “bowed” or “curved” bands frequently seen in electrophoresis, usually due to uneven heat dissipation or other electrophoresis issues. However, the bands all correspond to the same products (Z+). We added an explanation in the legend.
* General - three other key components of the pathway are MuSK, rapsyn, and DOK-7. Functional studies of these genes fall beyond the scope of this paper, but it would be helpful to know whether they are expressed in muscle and, if so, whether expression is muscle-specific.*
We have added this to the discussion. While Musk and Dok-7 remain unstudied in Ciona, it has been shown that Rapsyn is muscle-specific in *Ciona *(Nishino et al. 2011).
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__*“1) The authors report two main Nova isoforms that seem to be produced by alternative promoters. They also claim that the MLN isoform is more strongly expressed in two of the studied conditions compared to the MMM protein (eggs and heart in Fig 1G), while both are equally abundant in st. 22.5 embryos and brain (Fig S1 and line 130). Therefore, both isoforms are likely involved in the regulation of the Agrin AS event. When performing the experiments that require to express the Nova protein, the authors choose to work with the "MLN" isoform arguing that it is more "ubiquitous" than the "MMM" isoform, although the last has a more evident nuclear localization signal (NLS) sequence. In the minigene analysis, the MLN isoform fails to produce transcripts with Z6 exon (which seems to be the most common Z+ isoform in the brain), and the amount of Z11-containing transcripts is very low compared to st. 22.5. Given that the N-terminal domain has a regulatory influence, as demonstrated by the authors, and that the MMM isoform is potentially more "neural-restricted" than the MLN, an intriguing possibility is that the MMM isoform might enhance the inclusion of Z6 and Z11 isoforms. To solve this issue, I suggest two experiments:
- Perform the minigene assay with the MMM isoform of Nova and the wild type version of the minigene to check the level of inclusion of Z6 and Z6+Z5 (Z11) exons.*__”
We have added additional minigene assay data using the MMM isoform (S9). We did not detect Z6 isoforms with MMM, though there may be slight differences in the ratio of Z5 and Z11 compared to the MLN assay. We believe this indicates that nuclear localization is not rate-limiting in our heterologous mammalian cell minigene assay, although it very well may regulate splicing activity more meaningfully *in vivo *in *Ciona. *This may be especially true in post-mitotic cells, as opposed to during embryogenesis when actively proliferating cells will break down and then reconstitute their nuclear envelopes over and over again, thus potentially allowing some of the MLN isoform to find its way into the nucleus. We still believe the production of the Z6 isoform may depend on additional Ciona-specific factors missing from the mammalian cells in our heterologous assay.
*“- Test the regulatory activity of the upstream genomic region of exon 1a, in an equivalent way as for exon 1b in Fig 7A and B, to explore whether the promoter of the MMM isoform has a neural-restricted expression that could explain the AS pattern observed in st. 22.5 and brain.” * We have done this, shown in Figure S15, which revealed that the promoter upstream of exon 1a (encoding the MMM isoform) drives only expression in mesenchyme and some epidermal cells, with no neuronal expression visible. This suggests that the majority of the neural expression is due to the cis-regulatory elements in the region between exons 1a and 1b. However, this region does not necessarily activate transcription only at exon 1b (encoding MLN isoform), as intronic elements can loop back and regulate transcription off “upstream” promoters. Thus we propose that the Nova [1b] -2011/+6 region drives expression of both MLN and MMM isoforms, though this remains to be fully tested. We believe the regulation and function of the different Nova isoforms in Ciona is beyond the scope of the current paper, though we are interested in investigating this more thoroughly in follow-up studies.
__*“2) The authors unveil the conservation of an Agrin AS event between mammals and a tunicate species with similar functional consequences for AChR clustering. While this is absolutely correct, the relatively low similarity of the AS exons between Ciona and mammals shown in Fig 1A may raise confusion or doubts in the readers regarding the homology of the event (as it did in my own case before I checked it in more detail). Therefore, an explicit alignment of both constitutive and alternative exons in a supplementary figure to clearly demonstrate the homology of the AS event across major taxonomic groups (with a few vertebrate and tunicate species) might help.
Furthermore, expression of Nova in motor neurons of amphioxus (Branchiostoma lanceolatum) was previously reported (ref. 60), and a quick look into publicly available Agrin transcripts (____https://www.ncbi.nlm.nih.gov/gene/136443694____) reveals a homologous AS event in this cephalochordate species.
C1 "Z7/Z6/Z8" C2 (partial)
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These two facts suggests a potential origin of the Nova-Agrin regulation at the base of the chordate phylum (and not restricted to Olfactores), which could be mentioned in the discussion as a relevant possibility.*__”
We thank the reviewer for this suggestion. Indeed, we have now added a more detailed alignment with Agrin sequences from more species in Figures S2 and S3, including amphioxus as so helpfully identified by the reviewer. We have added the observation that amphioxus *Agrin *appears to have a single Z exon encoding the NxI/V motif (no evidence for two Z exons as in tunicates or vertebrates). This indeed suggests that this pathway may be a chordate innovation, as we now discuss. We also add AlphaFold-assisted predictions of the NxF motif binding to the equivalent pocket in Lrp4 in both *Ciona *and mammals (Figure S1).
*Line 168: Figure 2H instead of Figure H. *
Fixed.
Line 287: "Taken together, these results reveal that a Nova-Agrin-Lrp4 pathway for AChR receptor clustering at the neuromuscular synapse is conserved from mammals to tunicates." While this sentence might be true, from mammals to tunicates might imply that it is conserved in all vertebrate and tunicate lineages, and this is not explored in the manuscript (there might be secondary losses). It would be more technically correct to say something similar like "...the neuromuscular synapse is conserved in the studied mammalian and tunicate lineages" or "...the neuromuscular synapse originated before the evolutionary divergence of tunicates and vertebrates"
We have fixed this now in a few places.
“Line 342. At the end of this paragraph, the possibility of conservation of the mechanism also in amphioxus could be discussed.”
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We now discuss the amphioxus sequence and the idea that this mechanism was present in the last common chordate ancestor.
“Line 383: "the the apparent".”
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Fixed.
“I agree that the mouse-specific agrin minigene to test the functionality of Nova1 and Nova2 would be a suitable positive control to discard protein stability/expression issues.”
We have tested this now with GFP fusion images (Figure S7) and using the mouse *Agrin *minigene (Figure 3C). Both indicate proper expression/splicing activity of mouse Nova1 and Nova2, supporting the idea that there is still some type of cross-species incompatibility as tested in mammalian cells.
“The only minor limitation, in my opinion, is that it lacks testing of the MMM Nova isoform in the minigene assay, to explore whether it has (or not) a complementary function to the MLN isoform that could fully explain the endogenous AS pattern.”
We have added MMM minigene assays, and these were largely identical to MLN assays. We propose that the N-terminus and nuclear localization do not significantly impact activity of *Ciona *Nova as tested in mammalian cells, however we cannot exclude the possibility that things may be different *in vivo *in Ciona.
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Evidence, reproducibility and clarity
Summary: The manuscript reports the conservation of the Nova-Agrin-Lrp4 pathway for AChR clustering in neuromuscular junctions beyond vertebrates, using the tunicate Ciona robusta as a model species. In addition, it also reveals Ebf as a key transcriptional activator of Nova in the motor neurons of Ciona. One of the main focuses of the work is the detailed study of an alternative splicing event in the Agrin gene of Ciona, demonstrating its regulation by Nova and the developmental cascade of consequences in AChR clustering due to misregulation of the Nova-Agrin-Lrp4 pathway through multiple functional experiments. Furthermore, it …
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Evidence, reproducibility and clarity
Summary: The manuscript reports the conservation of the Nova-Agrin-Lrp4 pathway for AChR clustering in neuromuscular junctions beyond vertebrates, using the tunicate Ciona robusta as a model species. In addition, it also reveals Ebf as a key transcriptional activator of Nova in the motor neurons of Ciona. One of the main focuses of the work is the detailed study of an alternative splicing event in the Agrin gene of Ciona, demonstrating its regulation by Nova and the developmental cascade of consequences in AChR clustering due to misregulation of the Nova-Agrin-Lrp4 pathway through multiple functional experiments. Furthermore, it also explores molecular elements involved in the regulation of this event in trans and cis, including the KH and N-terminal domains of Nova (and their interactions) and the intronic YCAY binding domains.
Major comments: The claims and conclusions of the manuscript are generally very well supported with appropriate and reproducible functional experiments. For instance, the work demonstrates a key regulatory link between Nova and the studied AS event of Agrin using both a minigene system in human cells and a set of CRISPR/Cas9 Ciona mutants. Although analyzing mosaic embryos can be challenging, the authors successfully test different combinations of gRNAs to achieve efficient mutagenesis. Moreover, using the AChRA1::GFP clusters to measure the impact of the different mutants is very convincing.
While generally very robust and satisfying, the manuscript could benefit from addressing a few issues to improve its quality:
- The authors report two main Nova isoforms that seem to be produced by alternative promoters. They also claim that the MLN isoform is more strongly expressed in two of the studied conditions compared to the MMM protein (eggs and heart in Fig 1G), while both are equally abundant in st. 22.5 embryos and brain (Fig S1 and line 130). Therefore, both isoforms are likely involved in the regulation of the Agrin AS event. When performing the experiments that require to express the Nova protein, the authors choose to work with the "MLN" isoform arguing that it is more "ubiquitous" than the "MMM" isoform, although the last has a more evident nuclear localization signal (NLS) sequence. In the minigene analysis, the MLN isoform fails to produce transcripts with Z6 exon (which seems to be the most common Z+ isoform in the brain), and the amount of Z11-containing transcripts is very low compared to st. 22.5. Given that the N-terminal domain has a regulatory influence, as demonstrated by the authors, and that the MMM isoform is potentially more "neural-restricted" than the MLN, an intriguing possibility is that the MMM isoform might enhance the inclusion of Z6 and Z11 isoforms. To solve this issue, I suggest two experiments:
- Perform the minigene assay with the MMM isoform of Nova and the wild type version of the minigene to check the level of inclusion of Z6 and Z6+Z5 (Z11) exons.
- Test the regulatory activity of the upstream genomic region of exon 1a, in an equivalent way as for exon 1b in Fig 7A and B, to explore whether the promoter of the MMM isoform has a neural-restricted expression that could explain the AS pattern observed in st. 22.5 and brain.
- The authors unveil the conservation of an Agrin AS event between mammals and a tunicate species with similar functional consequences for AChR clustering. While this is absolutely correct, the relatively low similarity of the AS exons between Ciona and mammals shown in Fig 1A may raise confusion or doubts in the readers regarding the homology of the event (as it did in my own case before I checked it in more detail). Therefore, an explicit alignment of both constitutive and alternative exons in a supplementary figure to clearly demonstrate the homology of the AS event across major taxonomic groups (with a few vertebrate and tunicate species) might help.
Furthermore, expression of Nova in motor neurons of amphioxus (Branchiostoma lanceolatum) was previously reported (ref. 60), and a quick look into publicly available Agrin transcripts (https://www.ncbi.nlm.nih.gov/gene/136443694) reveals a homologous AS event in this cephalochordate species.
C1 "Z7/Z6/Z8" C2 (partial)Bla QADPAPLRQEGVG--LDGTTILNYPNAINK ... E-SNSIRE ... QEPNQDDNHFEVTFRTTSDHGLLLWNHKPGGG-DFIALAI Cro HSTDLLQDEQATAIYLDGTTKIMYRNAVKA ... --PNDFRE ... SRART-HNNYEIVFRTTARHGLLLMVGKAREGVDYIALAI Mmu IVEKSVGDLETLA--FDGRTYIEYLNAVTE ... ELTNEIPA ... EKALQ-SNHFELSLRTEATQGLVLWIGKVGERADYMALAI : . :** * : * :. ..: ... ::: :* : :*: * *::****
These two facts suggests a potential origin of the Nova-Agrin regulation at the base of the chordate phylum (and not restricted to Olfactores), which could be mentioned in the discussion as a relevant possibility.
Minor comments:
Line 168: Figure 2H instead of Figure H.
Line 287: "Taken together, these results reveal that a Nova-Agrin-Lrp4 pathway for AChR receptor clustering at the neuromuscular synapse is conserved from mammals to tunicates." While this sentence might be true, from mammals to tunicates might imply that it is conserved in all vertebrate and tunicate lineages, and this is not explored in the manuscript (there might be secondary losses). It would be more technically correct to say something similar like "...the neuromuscular synapse is conserved in the studied mammalian and tunicate lineages" or "...the neuromuscular synapse originated before the evolutionary divergence of tunicates and vertebrates"
Line 342. At the end of this paragraph, the possibility of conservation of the mechanism also in amphioxus could be discussed.
Line 383: "the the apparent".
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I agree that the mouse-specific agrin minigene to test the functionality of Nova1 and Nova2 would be a suitable positive control to discard protein stability/expression issues.
Significance
General assessment: This manuscript describes and demonstrates the deep evolutionary origin of a complex molecular pathway in the neuromuscular synapses of chordates. This work takes advantage of the broad genetic tools available in the tunicate Ciona robusta to support its main claims rigorously and strongly with a focused set of functional experiments. Moreover, it expands the known pathway revealing an upstream regulator of Nova in Ciona (Ebf) and opening a new research line in vertebrate motor neurons. The only minor limitation, in my opinion, is that it lacks testing of the MMM Nova isoform in the minigene assay, to explore whether it has (or not) a complementary function to the MLN isoform that could fully explain the endogenous AS pattern. Nevertheless, the current version of the manuscript is sufficiently robust to sustain its main conclusions.
Advance: Previous studies have reported deeply conserved AS events regulated by homologous tissue-specific splicing factors suggesting a putative similar function, such as the case of Esrp regulating the splicing of FGFRs in amphioxus and vertebrates (Burguera et al. 2017). However, to my knowledge, this work is the first to analyse the functional conservation of an alternative splicing event between chordate clades in its endogenous context while demonstrating an homologous ontogenetic role. In addition, it provides new insights of the molecular interactions between the N-terminal and KH domains of Nova and how they bind to the NISE elements in the Agrin pre-mRNA.
Audience: I consider this work interesting for a substantially broad audience, given that it reveals a surprisingly deep conservation of a molecular pathway across chordate lineages that is essential for the proper establishment of neuromuscular synapses. Thus, this study is imaginably interesting for evolutionary and molecular biologists, physiologists and even biomedical researchers that might be interested to explore a potential regulatory connection between Ebf genes and Nova in human motor neurons.
Fields of expertise: evo-devo, alternative splicing, chordates, transcriptomic and genome evolution.
- The authors report two main Nova isoforms that seem to be produced by alternative promoters. They also claim that the MLN isoform is more strongly expressed in two of the studied conditions compared to the MMM protein (eggs and heart in Fig 1G), while both are equally abundant in st. 22.5 embryos and brain (Fig S1 and line 130). Therefore, both isoforms are likely involved in the regulation of the Agrin AS event. When performing the experiments that require to express the Nova protein, the authors choose to work with the "MLN" isoform arguing that it is more "ubiquitous" than the "MMM" isoform, although the last has a more evident nuclear localization signal (NLS) sequence. In the minigene analysis, the MLN isoform fails to produce transcripts with Z6 exon (which seems to be the most common Z+ isoform in the brain), and the amount of Z11-containing transcripts is very low compared to st. 22.5. Given that the N-terminal domain has a regulatory influence, as demonstrated by the authors, and that the MMM isoform is potentially more "neural-restricted" than the MLN, an intriguing possibility is that the MMM isoform might enhance the inclusion of Z6 and Z11 isoforms. To solve this issue, I suggest two experiments:
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Summary: Formation of the postsynaptic apparatus at the mammalian skeletal neuromuscular junction is controlled by a signaling pathway in which NOVA-mediated splicing generates an active form of the proteoglycan agrin (z-agrin), which is released from motoneurons, and interacts with LRP4 in muscle, leading to clustering of acetylcholine receptors beneath the nerve termina. This delightful paper demonstrates striking conservation of the pathway in the non-vertebrate chordate Ciona robusta, and also reveals some striking differences.
Major comments: none
Minor comments:
44 - ALS, references 8-12. These are old papers. A new review …
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Summary: Formation of the postsynaptic apparatus at the mammalian skeletal neuromuscular junction is controlled by a signaling pathway in which NOVA-mediated splicing generates an active form of the proteoglycan agrin (z-agrin), which is released from motoneurons, and interacts with LRP4 in muscle, leading to clustering of acetylcholine receptors beneath the nerve termina. This delightful paper demonstrates striking conservation of the pathway in the non-vertebrate chordate Ciona robusta, and also reveals some striking differences.
Major comments: none
Minor comments:
44 - ALS, references 8-12. These are old papers. A new review should be cited, either instead of in addition.
56 - "many" cases of CMS - some are not due to mutations in this pathway
57 - refs 29-46. This is a very large number of references for a point this is quite unimportant to the story. It would be better to cite recent reviews.
168 - should be 2H
205 - make N terminal extension more apparent in Figure 3D
235 - not a complete sentence
308+ - can the authors clarify whether EBF knockdown has a selective effect on Nova vs general failure of the neurons to acquire a MN phenotype
614 - explain in figure legend the decrease in apparent MR from left to right in 4B
General - three other key components of the pathway are MuSK, rapsyn, and DOK-7. Functional studies of these genes fall beyond the scope of this paper, but it would be helpful to know whether they are expressed in muscle and, if so, whether expression is muscle-specific.
Significance
The paper is complete, and the results are compelling, nicely explained, and carefully documented. My comments are minor.
It provides an interesting example of ways in which a pathway for synaptic development is conserved across distant vertebrate species, as well as ways inhich it is modified. I know of no other papers that do this.
Audience: basic research interested in neuroscience, evolution and development
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Evidence, reproducibility and clarity
This manuscript examines the role of the splicing factor Nova in Ciona robusta, a tunicate that is the closest relative to vertebrates. The authors demonstrate the co-expression of Agrn and Nova mRNA during development in motor neurons, highlighting the correlative appearance of Nova-spliced exons Z6 and Z5. Importantly, CRISPR/Cas9-mediated inhibition of agrin splicing, deletion of its receptor Lrp4, and loss of Nova result in a significant reduction in the number of motor neuron-muscle synapses. This finding supports the notion that neuromuscular synapse formation is similarly regulated in non-vertebrates as it is in vertebrates. …
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Evidence, reproducibility and clarity
This manuscript examines the role of the splicing factor Nova in Ciona robusta, a tunicate that is the closest relative to vertebrates. The authors demonstrate the co-expression of Agrn and Nova mRNA during development in motor neurons, highlighting the correlative appearance of Nova-spliced exons Z6 and Z5. Importantly, CRISPR/Cas9-mediated inhibition of agrin splicing, deletion of its receptor Lrp4, and loss of Nova result in a significant reduction in the number of motor neuron-muscle synapses. This finding supports the notion that neuromuscular synapse formation is similarly regulated in non-vertebrates as it is in vertebrates. The authors subsequently investigate the domains within Nova responsible for agrin splicing and identify the transcription factor Ebf as a regulator of Nova expression in motor neurons.
The research is meticulously conducted, and the data are compelling, as they demonstrate that the Nova-agrin-Lrp4-MuSK axis is also operational in non-vertebrates. The conclusions drawn by the authors are generally adequate; however, I find some instances of "it is the first time..." to be unnecessary.
The work also presents an unexpected finding that mouse Nova protein is unable to splice the Ciona agrin mini-gene (Figure 3). I believe the inability of mouse Nova1 and Nova2 to splice the Ciona agrin could also be due to insufficient expression levels of the mouse proteins. Therefore, the authors should include either a positive control (e.g., mouse agrin mini-gene) or demonstrate that the proteins are expressed at comparable levels.
I am also not fully convinced that the model of autoinhibition for Ciona Nova is supported by sufficient experimental data. Again, there are no data showing that the levels of the various deletion mutants of Nova are consistent and hence, there could be issues with the stbsility of some of the deletion mutants and this could explain the observed difference in activity.
Minor Points:
- In all schematic presentations, exon Z6 appears larger than exon Z5. However, Z6 is only 24 bp long, while Z5 is 3434 bp long. Please adjust this representation.
- Is there consistency in the relative proportions of the 24-bp (Z6), 33-bp (Z5), and 57-bp (Z6 + Z5) PCR products? Studies in vertebrates have shown that AChR clustering activity is highest with the Z8 and Z19 products, while the Z11 product appears to be somewhat less active. It would be nice to also point out the different splice products are detected in Ciona.
- Writing errors:
Line 111: 'Z11' Agrin should be corrected to 'Z19' Agrin.
Line 168: "Figure H" should be updated to "Figure 2H."
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In my view, the other reviews provide interesting insights that will further strengthen the manuscript.
Significance
This manuscript examines the role of the splicing factor Nova in Ciona robusta, a tunicate that is the closest relative to vertebrates. The authors demonstrate the co-expression of Agrn and Nova mRNA during development in motor neurons, highlighting the correlative appearance of Nova-spliced exons Z6 and Z5. Importantly, CRISPR/Cas9-mediated inhibition of agrin splicing, deletion of its receptor Lrp4, and loss of Nova result in a significant reduction in the number of motor neuron-muscle synapses. This finding supports the notion that neuromuscular synapse formation is similarly regulated in non-vertebrates as it is in vertebrates. The authors subsequently investigate the domains within Nova responsible for agrin splicing and identify the transcription factor Ebf as a regulator of Nova expression in motor neurons.
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