Tricalbin proteins regulate plasma membrane phospholipid homeostasis
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Abstract
The evolutionarily conserved extended synaptotagmin (E-Syt) proteins are calcium-activated lipid transfer proteins that function at contacts between the ER and plasma membrane (ER-PM contacts). However, roles of the E-Syt family members in PM lipid organisation remain incomplete. Among the E-Syt family, the yeast tricalbin (Tcb) proteins are essential for PM integrity upon heat stress, but it is not known how they contribute to PM maintenance. Using quantitative lipidomics and microscopy, we find that the Tcb proteins regulate phosphatidylserine homeostasis at the PM. Moreover, upon heat-induced membrane stress, Tcb3 co-localises with the PM protein Sfk1 that is implicated in PM phospholipid asymmetry and integrity. The Tcb proteins also control the PM targeting of the known phosphatidylserine effector Pkc1 upon heat-induced stress. Phosphatidylserine has evolutionarily conserved roles in PM organisation, integrity, and repair. We propose that phospholipid regulation is an ancient essential function of E-Syt family members required for PM integrity.
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First of all, we would like to thank the each of the expert reviewers for their effort in evaluating our study. We are confident that we can positively address each of the issues and queries raised by the reviewers.
Reviewer #1 (Evidence, reproducibility and clarity (Required)):
**Summary:**
This study investigates the functions of the tricalbin proteins in S. cerevisiae, which are homologs extended synaptotagmins in mammals. It suggests the tricalbins modulate plasma membrane phospholipid composition and are particularly important for surviving shift to elevated temperature. The tricalbins are proposed to directly or indirectly promote phosphatidylserine …
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First of all, we would like to thank the each of the expert reviewers for their effort in evaluating our study. We are confident that we can positively address each of the issues and queries raised by the reviewers.
Reviewer #1 (Evidence, reproducibility and clarity (Required)):
**Summary:**
This study investigates the functions of the tricalbin proteins in S. cerevisiae, which are homologs extended synaptotagmins in mammals. It suggests the tricalbins modulate plasma membrane phospholipid composition and are particularly important for surviving shift to elevated temperature. The tricalbins are proposed to directly or indirectly promote phosphatidylserine transport from the ER to the plasma membrane during heat stress. They also promote the localization of the kinase Pkh1 to the plasma membrane during heat stress.
**Major comments:**
General Response: We thank the reviewer for the comments and opinions. While they are starkly different from the other two reviewers’, they have caused us to consider how we can add additional support for our conclusions and to consider alternative possibilities.
To determine whether the tricalbins and other tethering proteins play a role in phospholipid homeostasis, lipid distribution is measured using biosensors (FLARES) and phospholipid levels are determined by mass spec. The experiments are well done but say little about what role the tricalbins or other tethering proteins play in homeostasis. There are no measurements of lipid transport or rates of phospholipid production, degradation or modification. It is reasonable to propose the tricalbins transport lipids, since other proteins with SMP domains do, but this study does not present any evidence that they do.
Response: We thank the reviewer for stating that the quantitative microscopy and lipidomics experiments in our study are well done. However, we strongly disagree that the results do not provide new information on the roles of the tricalbins or other tethering proteins in membrane lipid homeostasis. In fact, the lipidomics results definitively show that Ist2 and Scs2/22 control phosphatidylserine (PS) levels. In contrast, loss of the tricalbins does not significantly affect PS levels. We will provide a new figure to make this even more clear to expert and non-expert readers.
While the tricalbins do not regulate PS levels, the data clearly show that the tricalbins control PS acyl chain saturation and cellular distribution. A PS reporter is reduced at the plasma membrane (PM) upon loss of the tricalbins and we have now confirmed increased localization at the endoplasmic reticulum (ER). These new results will be included in a revised manuscript. As the lipid desaturase Ole1 is localized in the ER, the lipidomics are consistent with increased ER residency of PS species. Thus, the data indicate that while the tricalbins do not regulate PS levels, they control either delivery of PS from the ER to the PM, and/or they may control the organization and stability of PS at the PM which would be a novel finding on its own.
The reviewer must be aware that there are currently no in vivo cell assays that directly (only) measure lipid transport. These experiments are subject to several factors including lipid metabolism, anterograde transport rates, bilayer organization, lipid accessibility, and retrograde transport rates. While our findings clearly show that the Tcb proteins do not control PS levels, we agree that there are alternative possibilities to explain the changes in PS distribution. In our revised manuscript, we will perform additional experiments to distinguish between these possibilities. New experiments will include mutant forms of Tcb3 bearing substitutions in the SMP domain. We will also examine whether the Tcb proteins control PS organization, availability/accessibility, and stability at the PM (also see Reviewer #3, comment 2). This latter possibility may reveal a novel concept regarding Tcb/E-Syt protein function that goes beyond their proposed conventional role as lipid transfer proteins. Based on the outcome of these experiments, we shall adjust the final cartoon model and conclusions in the discussion accordingly.
The study convincingly demonstrates that there are fewer Pkh1 puncta formed after temperature shift in cells lacking tricalbins than in wild-type cells (Fig. 6 C,D). However, there is no demonstration that this change in localization alters Pkh1 function or signaling.
Response: Regulation of Pkh1 by lipids is outside the scope of our current study that is focused on providing new understanding of Tcb protein function. However, the decrease in heat-induced Pkh1 puncta may provide insight into the PM integrity defects in cells lacking Tcb1/2/3 (as Pkh1 is required for PM integrity). To test whether Pkh1 function is compromised in the tcb1/2/3 mutant cells, we can test whether constitutively active Ypk1 (which acts downstream of Pkh1) rescues the PM integrity defects in tcb1/2/3 mutant cells.
There is no demonstration that association of tricalbins and Skh1 (Fig. 4) has any functional significance or affects phosphoinositide metabolism.
Response: We thank the reviewer for raising this issue. If the association of Tcb3 and Sfk1 has functional significance, then one would expect that loss of the proteins should phenocopy one another. Deletion of the Sfk1 cytoplasmic domain necessary for co-localization with Tcb3 should also phenocopy loss of Tcb3. This is exactly what we find. Localization of the PS probe is decreased at 42oC upon loss of Sfk1 or truncation of the Sfk1 cytoplasmic tail, similar to cells lacking Tcb3. Furthermore, we find that Tcb3 regulates sterol homeostasis at the PM (using the D4H probe), as has been recently reported for Sfk1 (Kishimoto et al, 2021). Thus, Tcb3 and Sfk1 not only co-localize, but they also share common functions in PM lipid organization. These new results will be presented in our revised manuscript.
The reviewer also inquired about potential roles for Tcb3 and Sfk1 in phosphoinositide lipid homeostasis, as Sfk1 has reportedly been implicated in heat-induced PI(4,5)P2 synthesis. However, while we find clear roles for Sfk1 and the tricalbins in PS and sterol homeostasis, we did not find a requirement for Sfk1 or the tricalbins in PI(4,5)P2 homeostasis upon heat stress conditions. These findings will be included in our revised manuscript. Importantly, our results indicate that the tricalbins and Sfk1 primarily control PS and sterol homeostasis at the PM, and may regulate phosphoinositides indirectly, and thus provide new insight into the key role of these proteins.
The study proposes the tricalbins directly or indirectly promote phosphatidylserine transport after temperature shift, but transport has not measured and other possibilities are not ruled out.
Response: While the Tcb3 SMP domain has been shown to transfer phospholipids in vitro (Qian et al., 2021), we agree that a role in PS transfer in vivo should be examined in more detail and that other possible roles in PS homeostasis should also be considered (also see responses to Reviewer #3, comment 2).
Upon heat shock, we not only observe a decrease in relative levels of the PS reporter at the PM in the tcb1/2/3 mutant cells (as shown in our original manuscript), but also a corresponding increase in relative levels of the PS probe at the ER and vacuole membrane (also see response to Reviewer #3, comment 5). This could reflect impaired delivery of PS from the ER to the PM and reduced stability of PS at the PM (i.e. increased internalization of PS into the cell).
In our original manuscript, we showed that deletion of the SMP domain (the lipid transfer domain), phenocopies deletion of the full-length Tcb3 protein in terms of PS distribution and PM integrity following heat shock. To more rigorously test whether lipid transport activity of the SMP domain is responsible for these phenotypes, we will generate amino acid substitutions within the SMP domain of Tcb3 that maintains its overall structure but impairs its ability to transport lipids (by targeting conserved key residues identified in Saheki et al., 2016). We will then assess whether SMP-mediated lipid transfer is necessary for PS homeostasis and PM integrity under heat stress.
We also agree that other possibilities should be examined. First, to rule out a defect in PS production upon heat stress, we are performing new mass spectrometry lipidomics experiments to measure levels of individual phospholipid species in the tcb1/2/3 mutant and wild type cells after heat stress.
Second, we have considered whether the Tcb proteins control phospholipid bilayer distribution (e.g. flip and flop). However, cells lacking the Tcbs are not hypersensitive to duramycin (Omnus et al. 2016) and thus phosphatidylethanolamine exposure on the extracellular leaflet is not increased. Moreover, cells lacking the Tcbs (and Scs2/22 and Ist2) are not impaired in the uptake of exogenous NBD-labelled phospholipids (and thus flip across the PM bilayer is not impaired). Possibly, there may be increased lipid ‘flop’ in the mutant cells at high temperature. We can test whether there is increased phospholipid exposure in the extracellular leaflet at high temperature, but our results thus far indicate accumulation of PS on internal membrane compartments (the ER and vacuole membrane).
Another potentially exciting possibility is that the tricalbin proteins bind and stabilize PS within the cytosolic leaflet of the PM and prevent its internalization by endocytosis or non-vesicular transfer. This mechanism would be completely independent of lipid transport to the PM and would constitute new mechanistic insight into Tcb function. We will test whether PS (and sterol) becomes more accessible (less stable or reduced sequestered pools at the PM) and internalized into the cell, upon removal of the tricalbin proteins. For example, we will monitor PS distribution in cells where endocytosis is blocked with latrunculin A.
As mentioned, there currently no cellular lipid transport assay that directly (only) measure anterograde transport. However, if the Tcb3 SMP domain mutants are impaired in PS homeostasis and PM integrity, then we can consider monitoring PS transfer in vivo. By performing the experiments outlined here, we will have thoroughly characterised the roles of the tricalbin proteins in PS homeostasis at the PM. Moreover, the new findings may even reveal novel roles that are independent of transport.
Reviewer #1 (Significance (Required)):
While this study is likely to be of interest to those studying the tricalbins or phospholipid homeostasis, it is incremental and provides little conceptual advance on what is already known about the tricalbins and extended synaptotagmins. They have already been implicated in lipid homeostasis in the plasma membrane and this study provides no new mechanistic insight into how this occurs. Similarly, it has already been shown that the tricalbins play a role in maintaining cell integrity during heat stress and there is little new insight into what role the tricalbins play. Perhaps the most notable part of the study is the idea that tricalbins are necessary for phosphatidylserine transport during stress, but considerable additional work is necessary to make a strong case for this claim.
Response: We strongly disagree with the reviewer’s opinions. Indeed, Reviewer #2 found our study “novel and detailed” and Reviewer #3 found the results in our study to be “highly valuable” and “interesting”.
In contrast to the reviewer’s claims, there are certainly novel findings in our study. Foremost, this is the first study that demonstrates a role of the tricalbins in PS homeostasis. Previous studies have implicated E-Syt family members in diacylglycerol and phosphoinositide regulation. Our results indicate that the tricalbins and Sfk1 primarily control PS and sterol homeostasis at the PM, not phosphoinositides, and thus provide new insight into the key role of these proteins. Second, while a previous study by Collado et al reported a role of the tricalbins in PM integrity upon heat stress, this work did not provide mechanistic insight into this process. We performed the PM integrity assays for the Collado et al study (as co-authors). Our current study now shows that Tcb function is needed for PS homeostasis and Pkh1 recruitment at the PM upon heat stress; both factors are needed for PM integrity under these conditions. As such, our current study does provide new insight into roles of the Tcbs in PM integrity. Finally, we are exploring roles of the Tcb proteins in PS homeostasis that go beyond their proposed functions as lipid transfer proteins. We are convinced that our study will provide novel and deep mechanistic understanding of the Tcb/E-Syt protein family.
Reviewer #2 (Evidence, reproducibility and clarity (Required)):
The study examines the roles of tricalbins in signalling in yeast. By using several mutations they are able to evaluate whether the interactions are caused by tethering the PM and ER or by other mechanisms. Particualrly powerful is their use of cryo-EM tomography and shot-gun mass spectrometery. They look at all the major lipids of the ER and PM and consider their interconversions. They identify large changes in lipid species with one double bond and with two, particularly for PS.
Reviewer #2 (Significance (Required)):
There is little information about membrane physical properties and how it changes as a result of changes in lipid molecular species. Nevertheless, the information provided is novel and detailed. The topic of ER-PM contact sites is new and evolving and this paper advances our understanding of the yeast system considerably. It also looks at protein-protein interactions by fluorescence methods and studies the consequences of heat shock.
Response: We are pleased that the reviewer concluded that our study on the Tcb proteins “advances our understanding of the yeast system considerably” and found our use of lipidomics to be “powerful”.
This reviewer only had only one critique; there “is little information about membrane physical properties and how it changes as a result of changes in lipid molecular species”. In our revised manuscript, we will provide new data showing changes in levels of sterol (ergosterol) accessibility/availability at the PM in cells lacking the tricalbin proteins. Sterol lipids exist in distinct pools in the PM bilayer (extracellular vs. cytoplasmic leaflet, accessible vs. sequestered) that control the biophysical and mechanical properties of the PM (packing order, permeability, etc.). Moreover, PS and sterol lipids are proposed to undergo mutual associations whereby PS controls sterol accessibility (the ‘umbrella’ model) and sterol in turn stabilizes PS in the cytoplasmic leaflet of the PM. Our findings demonstrate that the primary function of the Tcb proteins is PS and sterol organization in the PM, providing new mechanistic insight into regulatory mechanisms for membrane homeostasis. We will attempt to further characterize changes in PM mechano-chemical and biophysical properties to further understand how changes in membrane lipid composition affect membrane integrity.
Reviewer #3 (Evidence, reproducibility and clarity (Required)):
The Tcb/ESyt proteins play important role in contact site formation and non-vesicular lipid transport. However, their exact functions remain highly controversial. This study by Stefan and colleagues revealed a new role for the yeast Tcb proteins, especially Tcb3, in regulating plasma membrane phosphatidylserine, as well as PIP2. These results are highly valuable to people working on membrane contact sites and lipid trafficking. Overall, the results are fairly convincing and interesting. There are however some concerns and suggestions:
Response: We are pleased that the reviewer stated that our study has “revealed a new role for the yeast Tcb proteins” and that the findings are “fairly convincing and interesting”. We also thank the reviewer for providing constructive criticisms and helpful suggestions.
- Fig. 4, for Tcb3 and Sfk1 interaction, what about Tcb1/2, which would be good controls for the specificity of the interaction.
Response: We agree that it would be useful to determine if the Tcb3-Sfk1 interaction is specific. We will perform additional BiFC experiments to address whether Tcb1 and Tcb2 associate with Sfk1. Our previous work suggested that Tcb3 forms heterodimers with Tcb1 and Tcb2 necessary for PM integrity (Collado et al., 2019). However, the functional association between Sfk1 and Tcb3 may be specific to Tcb3, and we will test this possibility. It would be interesting to identify a function specific to an individual Tcb protein.
A central question is whether Tcb3 transfers PS by itself through the SMP domain or requires other lipid transfer proteins. One possibility is that the transfer is mediated by Osh6 and Osh7. Did the expression level of Osh6/7 change between the delta tether and the ist2scs2/22 null strain? Under normal and stressful conditions?
Response: We agree that it is important to address whether Tcb3 transfers PS via its SMP domain (an issue also raised by Reviewer #1) or whether this activity is carried out by another lipid transfer protein, such as Osh6 and Osh7. We have considered several alternative possibilities, as well as designed and performed new experiments, as described below (two key experiments are in italics).
To rigorously test whether SMP domain-mediated lipid transport activity is required for PS homeostasis at the PM under heat stress, we will generate amino acid substitutions within the Tcb3 SMP domain that maintain its overall structure but impair its ability to transport lipids (targeting conserved key residues described in Saheki et al., 2016 & Bian et al., 2018). We will then assess whether SMP-mediated lipid transfer is necessary for PS homeostasis and PM integrity under heat stress.
As suggested by the reviewer (and discussed in our original manuscript), the tricalbins might serve as scaffolds for PS transfer proteins, including the Osh6 and Osh7 proteins, under stress conditions. Osh6 and Osh7 are recruited to ER-PM contacts through interactions with the Ist2 tether protein where they mediate PS delivery to the PM under non-stress conditions (D’Ambrosio et al., 2020). However, strong lines of evidence suggest that Ist2, Osh6, and Osh7 are not required for PS homeostasis at the PM under stress conditions. First, loss of Ist2 has no impact on the PS probe under heat stress conditions (this result will be included in the revised manuscript). Therefore, the Ist2-Osh6/7 interaction is not required for PS homeostasis upon heat stress. Ist2 is not required for PM integrity upon heat stress either (Omnus et al., 2016).
These results do not rule out the possibility that the tricalbins serve as scaffolds for other PS transfer proteins, such as Osh6 and Osh7, under stress conditions. In this scenario, a switch between Osh6/7 tethering proteins may occur: from Ist2 under normal growth conditions to the Tcb proteins during stress conditions. However, our findings also suggest that Osh6 and Osh7 function is impaired upon stress conditions, including heat and nutrient starvation. Notably, Osh6 and Osh7 become mis-localized from the PM under upon heat stress (we can provide this data in the revised manuscript). The mechanisms for Osh6/7 attenuation upon stress conditions is outside the scope of our current study, but our preliminary results suggest that changes in cytoplasmic pH and ion homeostasis are involved; this will be a focus of a future study. This is also in line with results from a previous study (Omnus et al., 2020) that showed Osh3 forms intracellular aggregates in response to heat stress. The activity of the Osh proteins and other lipid transfer proteins, in general, may be impaired upon stress conditions (see below).
To directly determine whether Osh6 and Osh7 are required for PS homeostasis at the PM under heat stress conditions, we will monitor the distribution of the PS probe in cells lacking the Osh6 and Osh7 (osh6 osh7 double mutant cells) upon heat stress. This is a key experiment that will directly address the reviewer’s concerns.
As suggested by the reviewer, we can also examine the expression and localization of GFP-tagged Osh6 and/or Osh7 in tcb1/2/3, scs2/22 ist2, and ‘delta tether’ mutant cells. However, we have not observed any changes in other Osh proteins, including Osh2 and Osh3, in the ‘delta tether’ mutant strain.
Finally, we have considered yet another possibility. PS transfer to the PM may be generally attenuated under heat stress conditions and a key role of the Tcb proteins may be to bind and stabilize PS at the PM. In other words, the Tcb proteins may act as a ‘buttress’ to stabilize and maintain pre-existing pools of PS at the PM under stress conditions. Consistent with this idea, the Tcb3 C2 domains are required for PS homeostasis and PM integrity upon heat stress. If the Tcb3 SMP domain mutants are not impaired in PS homeostasis or PM integrity, then this alternative mechanism may be very relevant to PM quality control and organization in response to membrane stress. To address this possibility, we will address whether PS is internalized or removed (extracted) from the PM upon heat stress in cells lacking the Tcb proteins. This may uncover a novel role of the Tcb proteins that is independent of SMP domain-mediated lipid transfer.
Figure 5A. It is not obvious that the intensity of C2 decreases in tcb null cells at 42 degree. Perhaps there is more internal staining.
Response: We thank the reviewer for pointing out this issue. We think Figures 5A and 5B together convincingly show increased cytoplasmic localization of the PS reporter in the tcb1/2/3 mutant cells upon heat stress. More importantly, we thank the reviewer for pointing out the increased localization at internal membrane compartments. We realized it would be important to identify the PS-containing membrane compartments in the tcb1/2/3 mutant cells upon heat stress. We have now confirmed that the PS probe localizes at the ER and vacuole membrane (to be included in the revised manuscript). The example in Figure 5A also shows accumulation of the PS probe at both the nuclear ER and vacuole membrane. Thus, whilst wild type cells show little PS reporter localization at the ER or vacuole membrane, loss of the tricalbin proteins leads to an increase in ER and vacuole membrane PS probe localization after heat shock. Accumulation at the ER may reflect impaired PS delivery from the ER to the PM, and possibly rerouting to the vacuole membrane. Alternatively, as discussed above, vacuole membrane localization may be due increased PS removal from the PM and delivery to the vacuole membrane in tcb1/2/3 cells upon heat stress.
It is important to determine the primary function of Tcb3 since both defects in both PIP2 and PS were observed. If the change in PIP2 is due to a lack of PS, can overexpressing Osh6/7 rescue the PIP2 defect in the tetherless mutant?
Response: We agree that is important to determine whether the primary function of the Tcb proteins is regulation of PS or PI(4,5)P2 homeostasis. Our new findings definitively indicate that their primary function is PS regulation, not PI(4,5)P2 regulation. A clear effect in the distribution of the PS reporter was observed following heat shock in the tcb1/2/3 mutant cells. In contrast, there is no difference in the localization of the PI(4,5)P2 reporter in tcb1/2/3 cells compared to wild type after heat shock (also see response to reviewer #1, comment 3). In addition, cells lacking the Tcb proteins were not impaired in heat-induced PI(4,5)P2 synthesis, as assessed by metabolic labelling and HPLC analysis. These findings will be included in our revised manuscript, as they indicate that the Tcb proteins primarily control PS at the PM, not phosphoinositides, and thus provide new insight into the main role of these proteins.
Both PS and sterol are required for the proper recruitment of type I PIP5K to the PM (Nishimura et al., 2019). Therefore, defects in PS distribution could be responsible for the PI(4,5)P2 effects observed in Figure 2. However, overexpression of Osh7 in the ‘delta tether’ mutant did not significantly rescue localization of the PI(4,5)P2 reporter (included in the revision plans). Sterol organization is also perturbed in the ‘tether’ mutant cells (Quon et al., 2018), and this may explain why Osh7 expression did not rescue. Accordingly, Osh2/3/4 (sterol transfer proteins) rescue the PI(4,5)P2 effects.
The detection of PS by LactC2 has been well-established. However, an alternative approach would be to use the 2XPH in permeabilized cells. See PMID: 33929485 for some detailed discussions on the techniques. It is not a requirement for the authors to adopt the 2XPH.
Response: We thank the reviewer for suggesting another technique to confirm the results of the LactC2 domain as a PS probe. In this study, we have primarily used a genetically encoded LactC2 probe to observe PS distribution within live, intact cells. Whilst this approach was sufficient to identify accumulation of PS on cytosolic membrane leaflets of the ER and vacuole (see above), the addition of an exogenous probe to permeabilized cells may allow the detection of PS on luminal and extracellular membrane leaflets. Therefore, we plan to repeat our heat shock experiments using permeabilized cells and a purified tagged form of the LactC2 protein. This may allow for improved imaging of intracellular PS localisation and bilayer distribution. However, these experiments are technically challenging, and fixation and permeabilization conditions have not yet been optimized for yeast cell experiments. It is not yet known whether we will be able to optimize these protocols in a reasonable amount of time while completing revisions to the manuscript.
**Minor:**
- the discussion seems to be a bit long
Response: We will shorten the discussion and modify our final conclusions based on the results from the new experiments.
Reviewer #3 (Significance (Required)):
These proteins are highly important in cell biology/contact sites. The redundancy made it difficult to pinpoint their function. Previous studies have had a number of models. The current study proposed a new function of these proteins, i.e. PS transfer, and this is very interesting and valuable. There will be a good audience for this work. I specialize in lipid storage and trafficking, lipid droplets, cholesterol and phosphatidylserine.
Response: We are pleased that this expert reviewer found our study to be “very interesting and valuable”.
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Referee #3
Evidence, reproducibility and clarity
The Tcb/ESyt proteins play important role in contact site formation and non-vesicular lipid transport. However, their exact functions remain highly controversial. This study by Stefan and colleagues revealed a new role for the yeast Tcb proteins, especially Tcb3, in regulating plasma membrane phosphatidylserine, as well as PIP2. These results are highly valuable to people working on membrane contact sites and lipid trafficking. Overall, the results are fairly convincing and interesting. There are however some concerns and suggestions:
Major:
1.Fig. 4, for Tcb3 and Sfk1 interaction, what about Tcb1/2, which would be good controls for …
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Referee #3
Evidence, reproducibility and clarity
The Tcb/ESyt proteins play important role in contact site formation and non-vesicular lipid transport. However, their exact functions remain highly controversial. This study by Stefan and colleagues revealed a new role for the yeast Tcb proteins, especially Tcb3, in regulating plasma membrane phosphatidylserine, as well as PIP2. These results are highly valuable to people working on membrane contact sites and lipid trafficking. Overall, the results are fairly convincing and interesting. There are however some concerns and suggestions:
Major:
1.Fig. 4, for Tcb3 and Sfk1 interaction, what about Tcb1/2, which would be good controls for the specificity of the interaction.
- A central question is whether Tcb3 transfers PS by itself through the SMP domain or requires other lipid transfer proteins. One possibility is that the transfer is mediated by Osh6 and Osh7. Did the expression level of Osh6/7 change between the delta tether and the ist2scs2/22 null strain? Under normal and stressful conditions?
- Figure 5A. It is not obvious that the intensity of C2 decreases in tcb null cells at 42 degree. Perhaps there is more internal staining.
- It is important to determine the primary function of Tcb3 since both defects in both PIP2 and PS were observed. If the change in PIP2 is due to a lack of PS, can overexpressing Osh6/7 rescue the PIP2 defect in the tetherless mutant?
- The detection of PS by LactC2 has been well-established. However, an alternative approach would be to use the 2XPH in permeabilized cells. See PMID: 33929485 for some detailed discussions on the techniques. It is not a requirement for the authors to adopt the 2XPH.
Minor:
- the discussion seems to be a bit long
Significance
These proteins are highly important in cell biology/contact sites. The redundancy made it difficult to pinpoint their function. Previous studies have had a number of models. The current study proposed a new function of these proteins, i.e. PS transfer, and this is very interesting and valuable. There will be a good audience for this work. I specialize in lipid storage and trafficking, lipid droplets, cholesterol and phosphatidylserine.
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I was asked to include my expertise in the Significance part. Other reviewers did not include it. Maybe my last sentence should be removed?
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Referee #2
Evidence, reproducibility and clarity
The study examines the roles of tricalbins in signalling in yeast. By using several mutations they are able to evaluate whether the interactions are caused by tethering the PM and ER or by other mechanisms. Particualrly powerful is their use of cryo-EM tomography and shot-gun mass spectrometery. They look at all the major lipids of the ER and PM and consider their interconversions. They identify large changes in lipid species with one double bond and with two, particularly for PS.
Significance
There is little information about membrane physical properties and how it changes as a result of changes in lipid molecular species. …
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Evidence, reproducibility and clarity
The study examines the roles of tricalbins in signalling in yeast. By using several mutations they are able to evaluate whether the interactions are caused by tethering the PM and ER or by other mechanisms. Particualrly powerful is their use of cryo-EM tomography and shot-gun mass spectrometery. They look at all the major lipids of the ER and PM and consider their interconversions. They identify large changes in lipid species with one double bond and with two, particularly for PS.
Significance
There is little information about membrane physical properties and how it changes as a result of changes in lipid molecular species. Nevertheless, the information provided is novel and detailed. The topic of ER-PM contact sites is new and evolving and this paper advances our understanding of the yeast system considerably. It also looks at protein-protein interactions by fluorescence methods and studies the consequences of heat shock.
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Evidence, reproducibility and clarity
Summary:
This study investigates the functions of the tricalbin proteins in S. cerevisiae, which are homologs extended synaptotagmins in mammals. It suggests the tricalbins modulate plasma membrane phospholipid composition and are particularly important for surviving shift to elevated temperature. The tricalbins are proposed to directly or indirectly promote phosphatidylserine transport from the ER to the plasma membrane during heat stress. They also promote the localization of the kinase Pkh1 to the plasma membrane during heat stress.
Major comments:
- To determine whether the tricalbins and other tethering proteins play a role in …
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Referee #1
Evidence, reproducibility and clarity
Summary:
This study investigates the functions of the tricalbin proteins in S. cerevisiae, which are homologs extended synaptotagmins in mammals. It suggests the tricalbins modulate plasma membrane phospholipid composition and are particularly important for surviving shift to elevated temperature. The tricalbins are proposed to directly or indirectly promote phosphatidylserine transport from the ER to the plasma membrane during heat stress. They also promote the localization of the kinase Pkh1 to the plasma membrane during heat stress.
Major comments:
- To determine whether the tricalbins and other tethering proteins play a role in phospholipid homeostasis, lipid distribution is measured using biosensors (FLARES) and phospholipid levels are determined by mass spec. The experiments are well done but say little about what role the tricalbins or other tethering proteins play in homeostasis. There are no measurements of lipid transport or rates of phospholipid production, degradation or modification. It is reasonable to propose the tricalbins transport lipids, since other proteins with SMP domains do, but this study does not present any evidence that they do.
- The study convincingly demonstrates that there are fewer Pkh1 puncta formed after temperature shift in cells lacking tricalbins than in wild-type cells (Fig. 6 C,D). However, there is no demonstration that this change in localization alters Pkh1 function or signaling.
- There is no demonstration that association of tricalbins and Skh1 (Fig. 4) has any functional significance or affects phosphoinositide metabolism.
- The study proposes the tricalbins directly or indirectly promote phosphatidylserine transport after temperature shift, but transport has not measured and other possibilities are not ruled out.
Significance
While this study is likely to be of interest to those studying the tricalbins or phospholipid homeostasis, it is incremental and provides little conceptual advance on what is already known about the tricalbins and extended synaptotagmins. They have already been implicated in lipid homeostasis in the plasma membrane and this study provides no new mechanistic insight into how this occurs. Similarly, it has already been shown that the tricalbins play a role in maintaining cell integrity during heat stress and there is little new insight into what role the tricalbins play. Perhaps the most notable part of the study is the idea that tricalbins are necessary for phosphatidylserine transport during stress, but considerable additional work is necessary to make a strong case for this claim.
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